When you are in love- Love Poem

When you are in love – Love Poem

When you are in love, world seems round

You want him close, you want him around

When you are in love, you see her everywhere

Even the biggest  problems dont make you scare

When you are in love, all seems perfect

Nothing makes you tense, nothing causes you deject

When you are in love, you want to go in the rain

You smile all day and you can smile in the pain

When you are in love, you have a dearest wish

The wish is that may your love never vanish

You want her in your arms, you want her in your dreams

You feel your love, even when the whole world screams

Be thankful to God that you fell in love

For not many people are lucky to find true love

(By Anushka Suri)

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8 thoughts on “When you are in love- Love Poem

  1. You want him close, you want him around

    You want her in your arms, you want her in your dreams

    aren’t dese two lines in contradiction??

    noticing the gender…

    rest i loved it… very lucid.. and too fascinating..

  2. Lovely poem!
    Rhymes well!
    Structured very nicely!
    and the message, very clear!

    Only flaw which I could find is the repetition of the phrase, “When you are in love”.

  3. When you are in love, you wish time to stop
    When you are in love, you marvel at dew drop.
    You miss not being with her till now,
    You steal her pain, “smile on her lips” – you vow.
    When you are in love, you fear losing her,
    How days were more black before, you remember.

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