When you are in love – Love Poem
When you are in love, world seems round
You want him close, you want him around
When you are in love, you see her everywhere
Even the biggest problems dont make you scare
When you are in love, all seems perfect
Nothing makes you tense, nothing causes you deject
When you are in love, you want to go in the rain
You smile all day and you can smile in the pain
When you are in love, you have a dearest wish
The wish is that may your love never vanish
You want her in your arms, you want her in your dreams
You feel your love, even when the whole world screams
Be thankful to God that you fell in love
For not many people are lucky to find true love
(By Anushka Suri)
Anushka Suri 
You want him close, you want him around
You want her in your arms, you want her in your dreams
aren’t dese two lines in contradiction??
noticing the gender…
rest i loved it… very lucid.. and too fascinating..
Lovely poem!
Rhymes well!
Structured very nicely!
and the message, very clear!
Only flaw which I could find is the repetition of the phrase, “When you are in love”.
Thanks so much.. Edited the poem.. Now it sounds better. Thanks for pointing it out 🙂
Hey you actually edited the poem responding to my comments!
It was beautiful earlier too and its beautiful now.
yup.. second thoughts made me edit it. 🙂
So true…few find true love!
When you are in love, you wish time to stop
When you are in love, you marvel at dew drop.
You miss not being with her till now,
You steal her pain, “smile on her lips” – you vow.
When you are in love, you fear losing her,
How days were more black before, you remember.
nice !! you added a new dimension !! do keep posting. gotta learn a lot from you 🙂